guess I am making pizza for lunch later… 😂 wow! I liked the second person POV; I’d title it “slice through the fog” but slice not as verb, but like “slice” as in a slice of pizza
This was great. There’s something really otherworldly about the second person that I love. I’m writing a triptych of stories in past, present and future tense second person and it’s a ride.
This made me deeply uncomfortable 🙂
UNCOMFORTABLE??? I would love to know why
Was that not the intention???
Well I guess it’s a little weird lol comforting was more my vibe I think but I’m just also —- 🕳️🕳️🕳️
hahaha well everyone else thought it was comforting. It was giving social anxiety to me but maybe I’m just projecting 😅
This is making me crave pizza so badly!
Ahhh I read it too and was like dam.
Wonderful work!
Might need to revisit this, I’m so exhausted I saw a Balrog in the image.
Lmao the image is definitely not very clear on what it is. Thank you so much for reading 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🤧
guess I am making pizza for lunch later… 😂 wow! I liked the second person POV; I’d title it “slice through the fog” but slice not as verb, but like “slice” as in a slice of pizza
Haha similar to my og idea title for this piece. Thank you so much 🙏🤧
This was great. There’s something really otherworldly about the second person that I love. I’m writing a triptych of stories in past, present and future tense second person and it’s a ride.
I’m so happy you read it. 🤧 Definitely gotta look into your work. Thank you for the comment 🙏
It was very good. You’re work was actually recommended.
Seemed very natural.
I’m glad you read :) 🙏
Did you have Pizza for lunch? I swear I have witnessed this magic in person. Title - God's gift to humanity 😉
Is it that obvious? 👀😅 Thank you for reading!!
You picked my title 💗🙌💗
It was PERFECT.
Wow what a compliment. Thank you so much :)