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I'm glad this was a happy ending! There was a nice tension throughout and it was a nice surprise. Great work.

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I’m so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much.

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Beautiful flash fiction! Loved the lyrical flow of the word choice, and the pacing was excellent. Thank you for sharing!

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Wow! I love this!

Such a dramatic and heartwarming story - great job!

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Ah the tales of the heart, woven dramatically! So true, the heart holds all the power! Wonderful twist!

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