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Nick Buchheit's avatar

I'm glad this was a happy ending! There was a nice tension throughout and it was a nice surprise. Great work.

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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

I’m so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much.

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Beautiful flash fiction! Loved the lyrical flow of the word choice, and the pacing was excellent. Thank you for sharing!

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Mina Howell's avatar

Wow! I love this!

Such a dramatic and heartwarming story - great job!

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T.P. Kaaos's avatar

Ah the tales of the heart, woven dramatically! So true, the heart holds all the power! Wonderful twist!

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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Thank you so much for reading through all my work. I feel truly blessed. 🙏🥲 I am glad this one is effective in its goal.

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