It was extremely simplistic in its approach, which made it all the more horrific once we were reaching the end. Its like all those brooding tension at the start was release all at once at the revelation of the creature. Very inspiring for me, as i am looking for a creature story to write as well.
Wow thank you so much for this. Made my night! That’s what I wanted to go for with the reveal. Like an explosion of terror. Your work is great! Loved the imagery you displayed in the one I read! Need to read more.
Poor Dan. There was plenty of dread in this tale. I enjoyed the build-up and the descriptions. I can definitely see the monster in my mind. Great story, E.M.R.
I love how you played on the child's innocence... luring us in with his curiosity. The small scene where he showed empathy towards the " Doggy" only to be revealed with something horrific... dammn I heard the scream and saw the terror on Dan's face. The buildup was MASTERFUL and the final reveal was pure nightmare fuel. ILOVEIT!!!
It's hard not to feel it EMR!! You've set it up so well!!! I'm glad I read it!! and the monster is unique by the way, a hoof and an actual leg..makes me wonder if it's a science experiment.. like the "Tusk" ... daammnnn that movie still gives me chills.
A fellow claws fan. Love it! I really like the way you had the reader thinking it was a creature, then, "Oh, it's just a dog afterall." Then...
Shifters are one of my favorite entities, and I hope you write more. Maybe a sequel? 😉
Yes! Thank you so much. I thought if I let Dan get closer there was no escape. Sadly. 😭 And a sequel??? Never written one. Might have to try my hand.
i like how you had the dog turn into the terrifying creature! very freaky
I appreciate you reading. 🙏 Glad you found it freaky too.
Thanks for the read.
It was extremely simplistic in its approach, which made it all the more horrific once we were reaching the end. Its like all those brooding tension at the start was release all at once at the revelation of the creature. Very inspiring for me, as i am looking for a creature story to write as well.
Wow thank you so much for this. Made my night! That’s what I wanted to go for with the reveal. Like an explosion of terror. Your work is great! Loved the imagery you displayed in the one I read! Need to read more.
Nail biting, enjoyed reading this
Thank you so very much for the read and feedback! I appreciate that you liked it. :)
Poor Dan! I want to know what became of him.
Telling a story about a dog, but able to pour out extraordinary and scary expressions. The storyline is intriguing. I like this
Poor Dan. There was plenty of dread in this tale. I enjoyed the build-up and the descriptions. I can definitely see the monster in my mind. Great story, E.M.R.
AAAARGH
THEN WHAT HAPPENED!
i love that fleeting mysterious clawed hand... very good idea!
Thank you so so much for reading and sharing your thoughts! 🙏 I got the idea that Dan was never seen again. 🕳️😰
it certainly seems the most likely outcome !!!
I love how you played on the child's innocence... luring us in with his curiosity. The small scene where he showed empathy towards the " Doggy" only to be revealed with something horrific... dammn I heard the scream and saw the terror on Dan's face. The buildup was MASTERFUL and the final reveal was pure nightmare fuel. ILOVEIT!!!
Your comments are always so appreciated 🙏 I’m glad the fear still festers and I’m so glad you pointed out that you can feel Dan’s terror too.
It's hard not to feel it EMR!! You've set it up so well!!! I'm glad I read it!! and the monster is unique by the way, a hoof and an actual leg..makes me wonder if it's a science experiment.. like the "Tusk" ... daammnnn that movie still gives me chills.
Wow what a cool twist. I’d never thought of it like that. I’m always leaning into occult but that’s very dope too.
Look out for any stray holes and weird hands 👀