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The Life Lessons's avatar

What a disturbing and unique concept. I cannot get the visuals out of my mind. I am hooked!

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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Yoo thank you so much! 🙏👻

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Hot damn, this was amazing! The concept is super unique and truly terrifying to think about. I just came here from Mina's story, and I love how the two connect to each other! Such a cool experience reading them back to back.

And that ending with how the body looked?! Absolutely horror perfection my friend! Gruesome and creative as hell!

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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

So happy you enjoyed it! Glad we could put out some twisted shit! Your comments are fr the best, thank you

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Sandolore Sykes's avatar

For crying out loud! This scared the bejesus outa me!

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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

You’re amazing for the comment, thank you!

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Sandolore Sykes's avatar

Great narrative pull-in, by the way, it hooked me from the get-go.

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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

What a compliment WOW 🤩. I appreciate you even reading. 🙏

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Jared Lambert's avatar

This is so damn good. The buildup, the growing tension in the gut, as I read, was perfectly paced. The reveal felt like a relief when it happened. So good and so horrible in the best way.

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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

I'm coughing as I read this....omg 😲 nooooooo!

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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Omg thank you!! Mina’s part will be out today!

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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Omgosh the creep factor is dialed up to TWELVE! YIKES. This is so visceral. Omg

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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

😱😱😱😱😱 burrowing bees?!?!

Holy 😳

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williamphaynes/elliott's avatar

Never think of the hive the same way again

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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Glad I can twist the thought!

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