I liked this without a comment, I'm actually the worst. I am finally getting around to my reading list!
Bro, this fucks. Its like a churning nightmare. Great use of wording that painted the images in my head.
Feedback for this one would be hard. I'm not a good enough (knowledgeable enough) writer to nit pick little fundamental things, I always focus on the structure, how it made me feel, if there where things that took me out of it. The only thing maybe would be I wished the intro was drawn out just a bit more. really squelch around in the glorp.
Are you inventing a new genre of poetic prose? The details of your images with the gift of your word economy. You convey tons in a short piece. What was that phrase you used yesterday? That is YOU! Certifiably & authentically YOU!
Love this one, some beautiful imagery, and an even better flow. I am still very amazed by the volume and quality of your work and publication. Maintaining the quality you have pretty much everyday is very very difficult to do. Great job, keep going
I liked this without a comment, I'm actually the worst. I am finally getting around to my reading list!
Bro, this fucks. Its like a churning nightmare. Great use of wording that painted the images in my head.
Feedback for this one would be hard. I'm not a good enough (knowledgeable enough) writer to nit pick little fundamental things, I always focus on the structure, how it made me feel, if there where things that took me out of it. The only thing maybe would be I wished the intro was drawn out just a bit more. really squelch around in the glorp.
Your writing is very good homie. keep it up.
Always appreciate your feedback. Very insightful and something I might add
Dudeeee thank you so much. That’s what may set this piece over the edge, one of my favorites. I really appreciate you SO MUCH. This helped today 🙏
Ooh this is great! I really like this one
Thank you for readingggc 👻
I love this
best thing i've read from you so far
Super appreciated man. That’s dope to hear
I love how this transforms decay into beauty…and it completely changed the way I see tulips.
Yoooo thank you so much! That was the idea amongst what I was feeling at the time.
Are you inventing a new genre of poetic prose? The details of your images with the gift of your word economy. You convey tons in a short piece. What was that phrase you used yesterday? That is YOU! Certifiably & authentically YOU!
Thank you so much Maryellen! You’re the best!! 🙏🤧 Maybe I am but ONLY TIME WILL TELL
Love this one, some beautiful imagery, and an even better flow. I am still very amazed by the volume and quality of your work and publication. Maintaining the quality you have pretty much everyday is very very difficult to do. Great job, keep going
I really appreciate your words of support man. Literally always a blessing when you comment! I needed this today
Thank you 🤧 I really appreciate you sharing and I’m simply glad you enjoyed it :)