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Spencer D.W.'s avatar

I liked this without a comment, I'm actually the worst. I am finally getting around to my reading list!

Bro, this fucks. Its like a churning nightmare. Great use of wording that painted the images in my head.

Feedback for this one would be hard. I'm not a good enough (knowledgeable enough) writer to nit pick little fundamental things, I always focus on the structure, how it made me feel, if there where things that took me out of it. The only thing maybe would be I wished the intro was drawn out just a bit more. really squelch around in the glorp.

Your writing is very good homie. keep it up.

Hylia Corvidae's avatar

Ooh this is great! I really like this one

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