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T.P. Kaaos's avatar

So epically beautiful! The imagery of the fire and the count steals your mind, sinking it into the story with every passing word flowing flawlessly into imagery! I need to know who they are saving, can it be me!?

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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

I’m SO glad you liked it. Something completely different than what we discussed but it still works. AND — šŸ‘€šŸ‘€šŸ‘€šŸ‘€šŸ‘€

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T.P. Kaaos's avatar

Haha it is amazing! Make a next chapter for me. 🩵

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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

So it shall be written. So it shall be done. āœ”ļø 🫔

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T.P. Kaaos's avatar

I absolutely love that! The saying and all!

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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Lmao definitely stole it šŸ‘€

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T.P. Kaaos's avatar

I know it's one of my favorite sayings haha! šŸ˜†

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Rachel Tribble's avatar

Whoa. That was capitvating. How you dig into the darkness with such madness! Hehe

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Asteria Geisterblum's avatar

This gave me calcifer vibes from Howls Moving Castle but like, in dark and creepy. Absolutely enjoyed this! The way you easily personified the fire and created the character of it to work so well with the count

Awed

I’ve got to read this again; one line specifically stood out to me, so I’d title it ā€œthe stars can smell youā€

Seriously man, how do you write every theme so well 🫔 tipping all the hats I own

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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Your support and words of kindness really brightened up the morning. Thank you thank you 🄲 knew I got the talking flame from SOMEWHERE. Thanks for reminding me too

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Maryellen Brady šŸ’—šŸ“š's avatar

This is alive & the descriptions are magic!!!!

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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

I’m glad, kind of anxious about this one. Don’t know why. This comment helps šŸ¤§šŸ¤

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Maryellen Brady šŸ’—šŸ“š's avatar

When I'm anxious about a story, I kinda find that others love it! Deep breath…

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