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Pablo Báez's avatar

Okay, let’s make out under the petunias or it’s not real

Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Boom. Thats it. Thats the title.

Asteria Geisterblum's avatar

I loved this so much, it was so beautifully written. You probably have a title by now but I would have taken this one from the story: “Raven Feathers and Wide Hands”

Anyway, absolutely beautiful. Spotify was playing emergence by sleep token while I read and honestly, your story fits the song so well. Loved it

Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

I think I’m going to compile all the titles for the end of the week and choose my favorite. Thank you for throwing in. I actually adore titles like that. Also so glad my romance flash fiction seems effective.

RM Greta's avatar

When the finally kissed! Yes. So well done. Great job describing the scenery and the light! The light was everything.

Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

🤧🤧thank you!!

Andrew Taylor's avatar

Dude… wow. So lovely, the talent to write visceral horror, but also this?? crazy

Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Super appreciated coming from you homie! 👻

Rachel Tribble's avatar

I love this !! Sooooo much. It’s beautiful and the water!!! So soothing and filled with love. 💖 just at the edge of sky woman and thunder boy.

maddie rune🪰's avatar

Moonfire promises

Glimmer beyond the vines

Whispered oaths

Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Moonfire Promises is sounding very nice. Thank you so much 🙏

maddie rune🪰's avatar

You’re welcome

Annieguile Bentulan's avatar

I felt like I was there with them, swimming in the moonlight, heart racing, and feeling the tension building. The kiss? It was everything. Absolutely everything. I think the title should be Raven and Wilde.

Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Thank youu! 🙏 Dope title suggestion as well. So many to compile

Gillian Fletcher's avatar

Lovely tale—thank you for sharing!

Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

THANK YOU for commenting and reading

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

They both slipped out of their beds like snakes sliding between grass. Silently they walked into the milky light that lit opposite sides of the village. They both agreed to meet when twilight brushed over the leaves.

Omg there is some flipping beautiful writing here....this is a breathtaking story. 💗🥂💗

Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

🙏🥲🥲🥲🥲