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Asteria Geisterblum's avatar

So, today was a rough day for me chronic illness wise but I am very certain that I’m not speechless because of that.

Your writing gets better and better, literally I blink, and three pieces later I’m staring blankly at a wall in absolute awe.

Came here to take notes for Sunday so it doesn’t take me another 10 hours but I will have to come back because your writing completely knocked me into a wall (positively)💛 what an awesome piece

Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Wow your comment made my day. Thank you for saying that, especially coming from someone as talented as yourself. My intention is to improve this summer and improve I will! Thank you so much for your support. I can’t do this without you

Asteria Geisterblum's avatar

Excited to tag along for your summer journey then 💛

Artemis's avatar

The vivid descriptions, the unique structure, and the dread that seeps into you as you read… incredible writing

Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Wow such a compliment coming from you! Thank you!! 🙏🤧👻

Nyx's avatar

Ouhh I like like this and the way the font got smaller 🤌🏽

Mina Howell's avatar

THIS IS AMAZING!

JLG Noga's avatar

I really like it whenever I see someone play with story format. The font changes and the ritualistic formation of the words at the end helps evoke that lost, hazy feeling really well. Dope stuff!

Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

I’m glad it was a success!

Bence Ádók's avatar

This is epic.

Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Always blessed to receive a comment from you! Thank you!

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

😱😱😱😱😱 whoa dude 😱😱😱😱😱

Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Did the weird formatting work?

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

The spacing at the end? Yes

Pablo Báez's avatar

El Nene! 💪

Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Thank you bro!! 🙏🙏🙏🤝

Thomas Cargen's avatar

So good. And the art is collage and ink/paint? Really good.