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Annieguile Bentulan's avatar

Oohh, is this a vampire story? Please tell me I got it right, haha! It definitely gives off that vibe...first with how the narrator is consumed by her in memory, then in physical form, and finally in hunger. "Blackened nails sliced into my shoulders. Gleaming fangs found their mark on the tender meat of my neck." That line sealed it for me! Nonetheless, you wrote this so hauntingly...an intoxicating portrayal of obsession and surrender.

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Mina Howell's avatar

WOW this is amazing! Your words echo into my soul like footsteps in an empty hall - I absolutely love your writing and I'm so happy to have you in this challenge!

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