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Helen Grover's avatar

This was pretty compelling. Your opening paragraph was particularly strong, and I liked the way you revealed the exposition overtime and that Tommy didn't already understand why he was called an Omen. I can't articulate why other than the fact that they're both dark fantasy but it reminded me a bit of the novel Mordew.

Stories Sown With Hope's avatar

The tapestry seems like the “written” history of the kingdom.

This story makes me think of dominant traits, in humans, animals, plants. The odd or infected can be the dominant. As in this story of yours.

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