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Gamourtian's avatar

beautiful language, I loved reading it aloud as I read it, it has a wonderful sense of sound to it

Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

YO THANK YOU! I read it aloud as I write :)

Anna Elisabeth Vale's avatar

oh my gosh... you are an incredible writer!!

Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Means a lot! Thank you!!!

Thomas Cargen's avatar

Beautiful Edward

Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Bro thank you 🙏 you are appreciated

alex b.'s avatar

"ruins turned to life"

Felt. 🌅

Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Thank you so much! Proud of that mango line :)

alex b.'s avatar

You're welcome! Mango horizon is so good.

Keith Long's avatar

“There they go! They go! Eastward! Northbound! Seven thousand miles old!

Out from the swelling rapid blue! Rising! Rising! Renewed. “

I really like this bit

Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Thank you so much KL!